I love the pacing in this; you take your time and let things unforld in a way that's natural and in-character and believable, and the story is so much better for it. Your Kaylee-voice is spot on, and I love the way that Mal/Kaylee happens in the way that Mal.Kaylee should, soft and sweet but with that note of longing.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2006-01-28 02:43 pm (UTC)Also, you utilized Inara very well in this fic.